Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Character Descriptions

Granny is old. Granny was a short person. She had grey hair. She had jelly legs.

Jamie

Granny came in our class and knocked. She was funny. Room 3 was laughing. She was thin and wrinkly.

Haden

Granny’s stick came in first. She was as thin as a pin. Her legs wobbled like a jelly. It was funny. She had a walking stick.

Nikau

Granny had a walking stick. Room 3 laughed. Her legs shook like jelly.

Ben T

Granny’s stick came in the door and she was old. It was funny when Ms Keenan (Granny) talked like a mouse.

Te Ao

Granny Sandra came in to our class. She had wobbly legs.

Sam

Granny knocked on the door… We said, ‘come in’. Granny’s walking stick came in the door first. Her hair was white.

James

A granny came in the door. Her legs were wobbly.

Jacob

Granny went in our class and her legs were wobbly like a jelly. Her hair is white like the moon.

Norton

Granny

Granny came in the room, her walking stick came in the room first. Her hair was shiny.

Zoe

Granny’s stick came in the door. Her silver hair shone and she had wobbly knees. They wobbled like jelly.

Lochlann

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